Peer Feedback

My group showed our film opening to our class to see what they liked about it and what we could improve to make it better:

To improve the audience suggested we add a scream to increase the scariness. As the last shot cuts to black abruptly and the only sound is a mug braking they thought it would be better if a scream was also layered over just to see the effect it adds. They also suggested revising the title we have used was not memorable and the fonts we have used did not fit in well and were boring compared to footage as they were not clear.

The feedback was overall positive but they did have some things that they would change to improve our final product, this exercise was very helpful as it allowed us to see what an audience thought about our film opening so far and is was also insightful to see what people said we could improve. I feel that once these changes are added it will make our film opening better.